Jake one day was strolling down the hallway of his home and he finds a ak-47 laying on the floor with bullets in the chamber. So his older brother Deven, finds him carrying it around and takes it from him. So Jake decides to go start ouch his brother with some brass knuckles, and his dad comes into the room and tells them to knock it off or i will punish both of you. Jake is now extremely mad, but it should be his dads fault for having a gun on the floor.
Deven is so mad. He takes his brass knuckles and starts to beat his little brother up even more. Then his dad comes in his room and starts to scream at him. He takes the brass knuckles and shoots them with the ak-47 and then they all live happy for ever.
Your posts were interesting. I think you did great. It was interesting when you talked about having a gun on the floor. Your characters were a little crazy having a gun. Good thing that the dad came in. Anyways, your setting, characters, and conflict were great. You explained nicely and your details were nice too.
Jake runs at his dad super quick and takes the gun Starts to shoot his whole family and then runs out of the house. The police were called from the gunshots and they chase the little kid with a gun. He trips and drops the gun and then gets traped by police.